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wow! thats really nice! i love the eyes! and the arms look perfectly fine~

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Inked & colored:

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Hey I like this version better. Great stuff. Keep up the good work.

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Yikes I might be a little late but I had to point out that right after the two wires come together when don't seem to contour with the rest of the body (yes I'm talking about the breasts, get over it). The breasts curve while the cord remains relatively straight. That is, unless the wire is not on her body at all?

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its a good picture... but the pose is off.. it looks a little rigid

for one the arm going up (left arm) that is fixing her hair
the upper arm where her bicep is should be thicker... people
are normally much more meaty there then the forearm... even if
ur stick thin its true...

secondly the same arm should be raised slightly becuase that is
how it goes when u reach up...

third the breasts look lopsided... as with all female anatomy there
are three lines u should always have parallel to one another on
the torso... the shoulders, nipple line, and bottom of the breasts
should be parallel to eachother to be natural... with her right
shoulder lowered like it seems to be in the picture... or because
the left shoulder should be raised the breasts should move
accordingly....

the inking is good and crisp... tho your choice in where the
shadows lie is all over the page... depending on where the
shadows are the thickness of the line for inking should have been
greater...

as for the coloriung its well done altho a little too flat for my taste
the highlights you added to the hair are nice touches... but
should have been repeated over the entire image... a light color
for highlights on her clothes and skin would have made the
picture alot better...

oh yeah the inside of her palm should be in the shadow too ^_^

my two cents take it or leave it

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Thanks for the advice you guys..
emessen...heh I'm not too good with poses, thanks for those tips. I was going to make a thread about inking, but since you kinda covered it thanks :thumbup:
Ricky, the wire is totally off ^_^; I drew it in in a rush after I colored in the pic

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anytime

have an inked version still? id like to take a stab at coloring it

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:thumbup: . . . as usual

wOw~ da colored version looks great :thumbup:

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damnn nice drawing yo

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Originally posted by emessen
anytime

have an inked version still? id like to take a stab at coloring it

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it looks niceeee~~ nice job

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hey tahts really raelly good!

wow mad skillz

as usual, very nice....
don't worry you'll only get better as time progresses...
keep posting !

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woW~ dats ReaLLy nice... wen will i b able to du dat... oOfz.. xD

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